T3+Writing

﻿ __Thursday 15th September 2011__ S.C. * Recall past events  * Use personal pro-nouns (I,me)   * Has an introduction   * Has a conclusion   * Is written in past tense   * Has sequenced in order   * Tell us what, when, why, where - Introduction   * Personal comments Conjunctions to connect time (firstly, shortly, next)  Adjectives - Big   Nouns - Climbing   Verb - Run Introduction  ﻿ Who? Room 30 and 29  What? Outdoor Education Camp  ﻿When? Monday 5th Sept - Friday 9th Sept  ﻿Where? Ngamuwahine Day 1: ﻿Tramp, cooked own meals, set up rooms, night walk, Spotlight. Day 2: ﻿Swimming, loop track (bush walk), fire lighting, A.B.L, art, sisal trail, spotlight. Day 3: ﻿Activity day 1, swimming, possum hunting, Spotlight. Day 4: ﻿﻿﻿Activity Day 2, spotlight, Camp Concert. Day 5: ﻿Clean up, eel, Clash of the Camp, scavenger hunt, HOME!!!



﻿__Thursday 25th August 2011__ __Bobby the Hippopotamus__

At a huge zoo in the Gold Coast Australia there lives a hippopotamus named Bobby. He is as grey as a rock. He sleeps in a small cage at night and goes outside into a huge cage in the day time, it also has a big pool of mud. When he woke up one morning his head hit the roof and made a loud ‘BANG and CRASH’, he is really strong so he didn’t really care that there is a big lump on his forehead // Where is you W.A.L.T and S.C??? There is no puzzle in this story? You need to think about how descriptive you are being there are lots of different words you could use for big? trying exploring outside of your daily vocabulary. Not a lot of effort looks like it was put into this. // // Next learning steps. // // Write down, and read what is required. // // Expand on the vocabulary that you are using. // // Be more specific, for example, a small cage. what does the cage have in it? how small is it? can he fit in it? // // Miss Connor //

__﻿Monday 22nd August 2011 __ ﻿Walt: Describe our dream house. My Dream House Just down the road from where I live there is a beautiful blue lake with a lovely house beside it. My house is hot pink on the outside and it is two stories high. It has a big pool outside, its really deep at one end and really shallow at the other end. Theres grass as green as a bright green apple. Inside all the walls are green, there is a spa pool which is always turned on, in the lounge there is a big white couch with blue dots, a 60inch T.V, heaps of shelfs and a coffee table made out of glass. In my room there is a lovely king size bed, a desk with a really comfortable chair, a big walk in wardrobe and a bathroom with a big shower and a bath like a spa pool. I feel really nice about my dream house because it is really big and cool colours.